We encounted some problems in our first cut. Our captions were the original font and we should change that so it looks more professional, in addition to that our opening looked more like a trailer than an actual film opening. We decided to fix this by adding in a caption at the end of the opening saying 'Poppy's bedroom- 2009'.
The camerawork was very unsteady for the shot with the photo of Shaunagh, so we have decided to reshoot that shot by doing two separate shots. We will do that by looking at the whole picture and zooming in an separate shot.
The pace of the film was very slow, especially with the scene in Poles Lane, we have elected to cut down the beginning of the scene where we cant see Shaunagh that well. We also have to change the begining of the scene where Bethan is crying because something has happened with the lights.
In addition we still have to get the A-team correct with Shaunagh's voice over, we found out how to change the volume of the sound so we can play the A-team while Shaunagh is speaking. With that some of the wind is really loud and it affects the music.
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